Let's start with for some reason, you live with a girl you never met before. Which plot is more interesting?
a. This girl is in a pinch. She didn't have anything, and you helped her. For this reason, She obliges to pay your kindness and support you around. You feel weird at first because you helped because you want to, but you start to think to have someone to greet you when you reach home was a nice thing, and soon you realised you appreciate her presence.
b. This girl is, for some strange reason, need to live with you. The girl didn't actually hate you but hated the idea to live with some stranger. You agreed, but since there is no way out of this, you do your best to know her. You cook for her, you shower her with kindness, and slowly, the hard shell was defrosted, and you know her better. The more you get close, the weaker she looks for you and soon because your kindness, she began to appreciate you and helping you with the house works.
The First Idea
I typed on my smartphone, "Is it legal to took a child on the street and nursing him to health?" but too bad, my cell dead before I get any result.
The girl was maybe 15 or 16, with black hair reaching her waist and wearing a thick coat. But the coat isn't enough to hold the cold. I would like to call an ambulance, but it was midnight, and my cell was dead. I thought hard on what to do and checked the nearest police box, but no one is here.
Lost on what to do, I then carry the girl to my house. Hopefully, no one sees me and think I am kidnapping this girl.
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The house was warm but a bit messy. Putting the girl on my bed, I put a blanket over her and then work in tidying the room and making warm food. I took out my cell and then charged them.
Half an hour doing that, The girl now awoke and looking at me through my room's door still with her blanket.
"Who are you?" She asked, "Where I am?"
Cautious, like a cat. So I pointed at the warm food and urge her to come to the table. Still scared, she approaches the table and then tastes a spoon of warm porridge. I am sure it tastes okay, not delicious but edible. But the girl unexpectedly ate it with vigour and even asked second.
"Well, I found you on the street. I try to call police or ambulance, but can't," I said, "What are you doing there anyway?"
"I escape from home," she said.
I made a facepalm.
"I won't pry, but please understand you can get me in trouble for this," I warned, "Anyway, you can live here temporarily but please don't cause unnecessary trouble," I stood and then took out a new futon, but she suddenly caught my arms.
"Thank you," she said, and I am just nodded.
That smile was beautiful, I thought.
I typed on my smartphone, "Is it legal to took a child on the street and nursing him to health?" but too bad, my cell dead before I get any result.
The girl was maybe 15 or 16, with black hair reaching her waist and wearing a thick coat. But the coat isn't enough to hold the cold. I would like to call an ambulance, but it was midnight, and my cell was dead. I thought hard on what to do and checked the nearest police box, but no one is here.
Lost on what to do, I then carry the girl to my house. Hopefully, no one sees me and think I am kidnapping this girl.
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The house was warm but a bit messy. Putting the girl on my bed, I put a blanket over her and then work in tidying the room and making warm food. I took out my cell and then charged them.
Half an hour doing that, The girl now awoke and looking at me through my room's door still with her blanket.
"Who are you?" She asked, "Where I am?"
Cautious, like a cat. So I pointed at the warm food and urge her to come to the table. Still scared, she approaches the table and then tastes a spoon of warm porridge. I am sure it tastes okay, not delicious but edible. But the girl unexpectedly ate it with vigour and even asked second.
"Well, I found you on the street. I try to call police or ambulance, but can't," I said, "What are you doing there anyway?"
"I escape from home," she said.
I made a facepalm.
"I won't pry, but please understand you can get me in trouble for this," I warned, "Anyway, you can live here temporarily but please don't cause unnecessary trouble," I stood and then took out a new futon, but she suddenly caught my arms.
"Thank you," she said, and I am just nodded.
That smile was beautiful, I thought.
The Second Idea
There was a girl in front of my door along with a lawyer. A very familiar lawyer."Tenkuji," I greeted, "Who is this girl?" I asked.
The girl looks like grown up in a rich environment, something that apparently didn't exist in this rundown apartment I manage. She even looks at the apartment in distaste.
"Well, I need your help taking care of this girl," my old friend said.
I have taken care of a lot of people from him. A small child victim of abused household, a criminal who wants to confess their crime and seeking protection. This is my side job beside managing the apartment and honestly, it gives me more money.
But there is one rule to follow if you want to keep the job.
"Alright, come in, miss," I said, "I have no room left, so you need to spend a night in this room with me."
"You sure its okay?" the girl asked to Tenkuji.
"Well, he is capable," Tenkuji answered, "He isn't perverted if you worried about that and you need to get used to living without money anyway."
"Fine," she said and stormed inside, completely ignoring me.
Never ask the question.
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I never got curious, and I usually have a pretty good idea when guessing someone's character. She was looking at the television with interest wearing only her bathrobe.
I took down the breakfast I prepared.
"Miss?" I called and then she looked back and nodded.
It was the third day we live together, and she already calmed down living in one room with a guy. But she always makes a demand I can't fulfil before remembered that this isn't her own house and no servant to attend her need.
She looks miserable, to be honest.
"you okay?" I asked.
The girl shook her head.
Living with stranger always hard in the beginning. We both need to adapt at each other presence, and usually, it falls to me to adjust more on my guest behalf.
"Why are you taking care of me without question?" she suddenly asked while eating her fried shrimp.
"Hm...I enjoyed taking care of people," I answered, "Or rather, Meeting with new people make my life fun."
"even meeting me?" she asked, "I cause you a lot of trouble."
"Oh, so you realised it," I laughed and the girl pouted.
"You have your own problem, miss," I answered, "My job is not to pry. I am here to make you comfortable and sane. at least that was what Tenkuji said to me when I receive this job."
"I see," the girl make a small smile, "You are kind."
So yes, Both ideas were exciting and fun to write. But which one do you like most?
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